What a wonderful day to post a ode!
I wrote a ode to my blog!
Want to see?
Dear Blog,
Hello! My young pal.
My goody pal
Always by my side
Makes me see wide
Hello! My cheerful pal
My joyful pal
Always be my playmate
Better than my schoolmate
When I'm sick
Or I'm sad
Either mad
Even in happy times
Help me post many stories
About me
About trips
About friends
About my pet
Especially my favorite singer!
I will love you
With all my heart
So love me too
With all your heart
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Hi Jua,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good ode. You use personifications and repetition which is very effective. You should also add pictures to your post to support your words.
Thanks~
DeleteI'll look for pictures as well!
Hi!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your ode to your blog! You did a good job in implementing personifications and repetition in your ode. Keep up the good work!
-Yongwook, Oh (Writing TA)